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Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter 10
Chapter 10 After the day’s activities in the yard, Jane decided that she had a wonderful time. Minnie was absolutely adorable in her pretty little outing dress and she found ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: John Manley Chapter 5
Chapter 5 It was a quiet morning and John had thought last night about what Joel had said. He was always making him feel so guilty. John was studying his ...
Feb 27, 2007 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter 9
Chapter 9 Marcus was still a little faint as he sat in the parlor awaiting Jane’s return. Apparently she had hurried off to get a pot of cold water to ...
Feb 22, 2007 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter 2
Chapter Two Marcus headed home that night in a bad mood. There was nothing more that he wanted to do, but sleep and never see the sight of that irritating ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter 1
Chapter 1 There was no telling whether Marcus Daniel was concerned about anything nowadays. It seemed as though he preferred the life of solitude, to which he kept to himself, ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Best Left Silent
You're a very good writer. Hope to talk to you soon.
Feb 8, 2007 -
Re: A Vampire Romance
I tried...I'll work on it later.
Feb 7, 2007 -
Re: Addi-marie
Hey, I'm a Christian too. There's something we have in common. Keep up the good work, but try to stay in whatever tense you're in. It gets confusing.
Feb 7, 2007 -
Re: heart brake
I think I know how this writer feels...I think everyone, who has ever been in love, knows what it feels like. And I think that the feeling that I think ...
Feb 2, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
I liked this poem. Write more. I enjoyed this one as did my sister.
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: The Most Depressing Game
maybe you should write a story with some makes a story interesting when you create characters and mold them into who you want them to be. Be the God in ...
Jan 30, 2007 -
Re: NO TITLE YET
yes...a little bit of romance would be nice. Oh and I wrote another story. I didn't have a title so I just labeled it Romance. Anyway...keep up the good writing. ...
Jan 29, 2007 -
Re: Romance Chapter 5
Chapter 5 Prince Andre closed the door to his office for he had scheduled a meeting. Orlando and Matthias sat in their seats with arms crossed. It was obvious that ...
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Re: Romance Chapter 4
Chapter 4 Matthias couldn’t understand why Danielle chose that moment to faint. Here ha had a lot of things to attend to and she had to go and faint. Matthias ...
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Re: Romance Chapter 3
Chapter 3 Alyssa and Danielle had been traveling by carriage to the palace for hours. Danielle had been reading the whole trip and Alyssa just thought about how much she ...
Jan 29, 2007
